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The southeast stairway

Post by MellieCharming on Sat Jan 25, 2014 8:30 pm

Alright so sometimes little aspects of my everyday life will hit me funny and give me an idea for a story. This is one of them and the date on it is from almost a year ago. Just a short piece that could lead to a bigger story.

The southeast stairway by the math building is always crowded and busy at 2:17pm. Everybody rushing about like ants round their hill, trying to escape school, eager to return home or tk see their friends.
The stairs are always crowded which aggravates my 4 mph speed walk to the Junior parking lot, but in my hurried decent down the stirs I always keep a death grip gripon the hand rail. The mass of my heavy backpack plus the force of gravity would probably drag me down to the landing quickly if I were to let go.
It was me of those days amide the 2:17 commotion and speedy stator decent that my hand happened to bump into somebody else's.
Two mutterings of "sorry". Two strangers continue about their two sepereate lives.
Two grey eyes imprinted in my mind.
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Post by 13obthepirate on Mon Jan 27, 2014 10:39 pm

I know it's just a beginning, but I really like it. It's written in sorta a weird way that I really enjoy. I encourage you to write more.
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Post by MellieCharming on Mon Jan 27, 2014 10:46 pm

Thanks. I have a couple idea bouncing around for a similar idea about the girl in spot 801. But I don't know. That was a year ago almost and I don't know what direction I would take it.
But thank you Smile

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Post by Fearix Kamori on Tue Jan 28, 2014 6:08 am

Yeah, I like it

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Post by Tiana on Wed Jan 29, 2014 7:12 pm

I like it. Like 13 said, different writing. It is awesome. Smile

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Post by MellieCharming on Mon Feb 16, 2015 12:16 am

This isn't exactly here, but I did start putting some of my newer writings up.
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